Second Crimean War # 167
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Agent0Gecko
26th Jul 2011, 3:42 PM

The shadows on this page are awesome! It looks really great.

Something I've noticed, though, is on profile you tend to draw your characters' mouths really low. Like Iaroslav, in the last panel, it seems like it was kind of crammed in at the bottom.

That's what it looks like to me, anyway.

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The Doodler
27th Jul 2011, 12:18 AM

You're right -- it's a side effect of recovering from the flounder side-of-the-head mouth. But you're right, and I'll keep working on that.

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SketchingArt
30th Jul 2011, 12:10 PM

I like the way you have Yur-(ahem) Yana sitting in the next to last panel. The whole page has a neat tone because of the accurate night lighting.

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The Doodler
30th Jul 2011, 6:59 PM

Thanks. I love drawing night lighting.

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